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And so my first DA story ends. Overall I'm quite happy with how this worked out, but then again Zampano deserves the credit for providing the guidelines.

So really its his story.
Praise him, I compell you!

Will have the next one up soon.
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JEEZ!

Cranking up the action there a tad!

The end has a very neat twist that ties everything together very well.

The Blackfire's a tantalising idea, I want to know what it actually does (apart from murk everything within a broad radius) although I guess in a way part of the fun is NOT knowing. I love gadgets & weapons.